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Intoxicated by your whims...
by Robert JudeAce
copyright 03-14-2002


Age Rating: 18 to 127

 
Come, possess my thoughts…

Fill them with overt wonder
Fondle them with dazzling display-

Send them into another dominion
Where control is a manner of intense surrender…

Mold them into an unknown form
Like cosmic clay set them into motion
Alive and undaunted

They must arouse what you have given
What you have revealed to my naked veins…

Days pass like flying fish across the sea’s horizon-
I look for a catch of unusual proportions…

The sun feels good as I set the sails to life:
Swiftly moving this vessel into being…

We sail into the heavenly horizon
As your hair flows with the wind

You voice surrounding pure inspiration
As I have become intoxicated by your wandering whims.


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03-21-2002 Treena Turner    

It sounds like the surrender of love:)
03-21-2002 Melissa Rives    

This is outstanding to say the least....my favorite lines are the ending...perfection. :)
03-14-2002 Kay Lee Kelly    

What everyone else said,,,, well me too.
03-14-2002 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

Intoxicated by wandering whims... mmm... sounds so wonderful! *soft smile and gentle hugs* You're amazing, has anyone ever told you that?
03-14-2002 Peggy Bertrand    

Bravo, well done and so full of images I especially enjoyed this verse." You voice surrounding pure inspiration
As I have become intoxicated by your wandering whims. " Thanks
03-14-2002 Sharron Tyrrell    

SIGH ,,,, beautiful
03-14-2002 Nancy Pawley    

The first line caught my eye..'Come, possess my thoughts'..that is me in my totality, wanting to get inside a person's mind and really know..everything! Great read.
Nancy
03-14-2002 Eileen Waldron    

I love this line "Days pass like flying fish across the sea’s horizon- "Of course the whole poem is splendid...;-)
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