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Odd-Shaped Cloud
by Dan Zuewski
copyright 03-26-2002


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
I watch the somber hues of morning
Sedate me finally
As they creep across my room
The grayness soothes
It seeps in like rainwater
Refreshing like the sleep
I was denied
Until now

Now when the stars are fading
Now when the moon is slowly
Becoming just an odd-shaped cloud
Hanging before my vision
A whispered sigh as it too finds rest
As the grayness becomes violated
With the rape of sunrise

Bright blossoming red and purple
Blood on the nimbus
Bruises in the air
Slowly now the eyes are falling
Slowly now the breathing settles
Slowly now the dream becomes the man

Rising, falling chest
Under a sky so fiery and violent
Descending into resting bliss
Warm, peaceful silence

March 23, 2002




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05-13-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

This was very poetic. I like it, Anthony
12-03-2003 Keely Daly    

This is just wonderful! Very well written. Fantastic imagery!
Great work!
08-31-2002 Heather Lynn McDanel    

Great poem! I read the other comments and agreed with them.
07-18-2002 Melissa Rives    

This was stunning as always... Beautiful imagery!!!
05-02-2002 Nancy Pawley    

I well remember you from wbm..your poetry still has that certain air and ring to it..well done.
Nancy
03-28-2002 Kay Lee Kelly    

Soft and wistful,... sleep to dream, very well done.
03-27-2002 Peggy Bertrand    

Well done beautiful metaphors. images are stunning. Thank you for writing this one.
03-26-2002 Treena Turner    

My name is Breanna. I really like your poem. I can tell that you're a pretty nice guy by reading this. Send me your picture. Oopps. This is not a dating service. Hahahah. Beautifully done.
03-26-2002 Treena Turner    

This reminded me of a great chapter of a book I just can't put down, you should write more short stories, or chapters:)
03-26-2002 Rita Putatunda    

The vivid imagery is quite fantastic!
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