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Good work! Although I can't relate to this in the slightest, I enjoyed this poem. However, I do suggest you capitalize each line... The sentiments and ideas in this piece is good, and your choice of words paints a picture in my mind. Your comparisons also made this piece flow better. Kinda funny that you, PnP's seventh author, are getting comments from PnP's 2,579th author, eh? Your works always seem to stay popular too, now that's talent! Good work, keep writing!
Leigh of the Commenting Community
P.S. Does it ever bother you that "PnP" with that capitalization-formation isn't in the Spell Checker...? ...And that all PnP's authors are so picky with praise?
What would we ever have done without kids? I know our lives would have been missing so much. My kids are married now, but we are still close. I enjoyed this write.
Mary, what a beautiful poem..if only each of us could continue to see through the eyes of a loving child, the world would be more than beautiful.
Nancy
Even before having children of my own to make me feel like a million dollars, I have always told my mother how wonderful I see her. I can see the disbelief at times in her eyes, and definitely the disagreement... but I always see that flicker of glee in her eyes that it brings to her. :) She's great. And it feels wonderful to know my kids see me that way as well. (Boy, do they have a lot to learn... hahahaha)
Thanks for reading. I love reading your comments. :)
Thank you for sharing this poem. I also love the "me" my children see. My daughter is now 18 years old, and she says the most amazing things to me about what she appreciates in me and how thankful she is for who I am and what I do. Whenever I feel like I have failed, I only need to see myself the way she sees me, and I feel wonderful again.
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