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the Picknick
by Michaela Clayton (Age: 21)
copyright 04-09-2002


Age Rating: 4 to 17

 
Ding dong!, "i'll get it mum" raye shouted as she ran down the stairs to open the door, "it will be star!", she opend it and sure enough star was standing out on the porch. Raye grabed her coat and rushed out the house she grabed her bike a place the small container she was carring in the basket of the bike, "what the rush raye?" star asked as they pedeld of down the dusty path, "i have got to be home bye 5 so we only have 7hours to get there and back and eat" raye answard her as the pedeld faster and faster, the approced a cliff, but they diddnt slow down, "are u ready star" raye asked as she was about to fly over it, "yep!" the two shout strate over the cliff and flew int o the air but they were still climing past the clouds and into the sky. The veiw was beautiful they could see star's house and the shopping center, it was like a modle village. They flew past some birds and then the saw a raindow..way up high in that sky and they pedel twords it, when they got near they could see the howl iland so they settled down to have a rest, "your right raye this is beautiful.
the two payed for hours and then set down to eat the wonderfull food they had cooked, they indulged them selfs with cake choclate sandwiches and even a cup of tea.
soon the sun drew to set and it was time to go, the two grabed their stuff and place it onto their bikes and began to pedel home, befor they new it, it was 5 and they had just reached raye hoce."bye raye see you tommorro!" star cried as she peddled away,
"yer see ya star", and the two would never forget their adventure




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08-26-2004 Paula T.    

Lotsa spelling mistakes.
You have got to edit it.
Lots of grammar mistakes.
When someone says something you gotta start a new paragraph and you have got to capitalize.
Your layout is good, but work on what I told you to work on.
When you edit it, e-mail me and I'll give you praise-points.


07-03-2002 Sara Schmenk    

It's a nice story. Needs a bit of editing.



04-25-2002 Peggy Bertrand    

I like the story you can recheck it later.


04-09-2002 Michaela Clayton    

yer i know i cant spell ill check it later


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