Oh, On The Radio by Mary -BrytEyz- Ball

Oh, on the radio
I want to hear our song
Something sweet and peaceful
something slow and long

Like music from a bird
tho lyrics are from me
Listen to every word
to see just what I see

Oh, on the radio
I'm sure you'll hear our song
And maybe then you'll know
that we've done nothing wrong

The lessons that we've learned
We've done so painfully
And bridges that we've burned
they burned so beautifully

Oh, on the radio
I'll hear them sing our song
Others too, but they won't know
just how it all went wrong

All the words that they've heard
of things that just can't be
Like hatred being cured
and you here holding me

Oh, on the radio
please listen for our song
We wrote it when together
and I'll sing it all along

So, when the painting's blurred
and you try but can not see
When emotions have been stirred
that's when you'll be with me!
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My poem "You'll Hear Our Song" was originally a VERY LONG song. I took out the chorus' and made a poem out of them. Now I've 2 to post instead of 1. If you wish to see how I wrote it originally, simply insert the first two stanzas of this poem after the first four of the other poem. And then the second two of this after the second four of the other, and so on. Let me know what you think... HONESTLY. I'd love to know and don't feel I can improve without your proffered criticism. Thanks so much!

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Oh, On The Radio
by Mary -BrytEyz- Ball (Age: 38)
copyright 04-30-2002

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Oh, On The Radio by Mary -BrytEyz- Ball (Age: 38) copyright 04-30-2002 Age Rating: 7 to 127

Oh, On The Radio
by Mary -BrytEyz- Ball (Age: 38)
copyright 04-30-2002

Age Rating: 7 to 127