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my pooh festeval
by Leanne Butler
copyright 06-04-2002


Age Rating: 4 to 15

 
poem no1

i could spend a happy morning,
seing roo,
i could spend a happy morning,
being pooh
for it doesnt seem to matter,
If i dont get any fatter,
What i do.

poem no2

The more it snows
(Tiddly pom),
The more it goes,
(Tiddly pom),
The more it goes,
(Tiddly pom),
ON snowing.

And nobody knows,
(tiddly pom)
how cold my toes
(tiddly pom)
how cold my toes
(tiddly pom)
are growing!

poem no3

wot shal;l we do about poor little tiger?
If he never eats he'll never get better.
He doesn't like honey and haycorns and thissles.
Because of the taste and of the brisstles.
And all good thins in which animals likes.
have the wrong sort of swallor or to many spikes.

poem no4

I could spend a happy morning,
Seing piglet.
I could spend a unhappy not morning,
Seing piglet.
And it doesnt seem to matter
If i dont see owl and eyore.
or any of the opthers,
And i am not goin to see owl and eyore,
Or any of the others.
or christopher robin toooo.

These were all based on 1 book which iz my favorite and i have read it so many times so plz plz plz add comments and tell me what i could improve because hey NOTHING IS PERFECT!




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06-05-2002 Melissa Rives    

very cute...you are well on your way!!! :) :)
06-05-2002 Robert Betts    

Actually as poetry aimed at children (I noted the age rating you chose) the poetry is not bad. You do need to check and edit so the spelling errors are fixed. One is 'i'. That should be a capital 'I'.

bob
06-05-2002 Peggy Bertrand    

cute and adorable write.
06-04-2002 William Robbins    

Hi Leanne:

This was a good foundation. Practice is the best form of improvement. You've got the essence of literary soil in your words, time will bring the flowers! Keep writing.
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