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Rectangular Spools
by William Robbins
copyright 06-10-2002


Age Rating: 18 to 127

 
Dust collects in the dark, gray windowsills
like snow drifts.
It isn’t just the usual
grainy foliage of filth,
but one giving life
to a film
over the testimonial urgency
of premeditated incantations
uttered in dire and despair conviction
to lure Oz’s playground
deep into the fiber of life’s most precious reveries.
Stretching the thread of accumulating, emotive staining phantoms
with the soul’s tongue,
how often the line breaks
from the spool of expectations
where doubts and fears
add corners and definitions
that creates crimps
to one’s stroll along the carpet of visions
leading beyond reality’s narrow alleys.


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06-18-2002 Melissa Rives    

I love your use of the darkness in which you show the wisdom found within reaching and moving beyond the lines... :)


06-12-2002 Nancy Pawley    

I especially liked the lines 'where doubts and fears add corners and definitions
that creates crimps
to one’s stroll along the carpet of visions
leading beyond reality’s narrow alleys.' It's the crimps that add unique textures to each person's life..one's vision of reality may not appeal to someone else's version, but that's what makes us individuals and not mirror images, pleasing everyone but ourselves.
Nancy





06-12-2002 Peggy Bertrand    

Very powerful images and verse.. excellent.


06-11-2002 Maralee Gerke    

I really like the last two lines ofthis poem. They mean much to everyone who writes.


06-10-2002 Laryalee Fraser    

Powerfully expressed....well written, William!
Lary


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