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Say it with
by William Robbins
copyright 07-22-2002


Age Rating: 18 to 127

  Say it with
Picture Credits:

(graphic courtesy of http://www.animationfactory.com)

Say it with song,
in melodious,
lilting aphrodisiac construction
of ear edifices
erected in the heart.
Say it with oil,
as a flaring prism of hued diamonds
bulging the eyes with the timbers of sight,
building indelible crowns of recall
inside the mind.
Say it with succulent morsels,
bursting
the sensory reservoirs
until the body
stings with a sated ecstasy.
Say it with ink,
sculpturing the incarnation of intuitiveness
festering as heaven’s portal
and serving an eternal resplendent banquet
unto the soul.


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09-19-2002 Audrey Sullivan    

Realy cute,and great.
08-21-2002 Lee Gordon    

i really like the idea. how do we say things, and why? i think it trys to answer some of those fundamental questions. i also like the way your verbage slides through. you speak of song, oil, and ink. these are all very slippery things, kind of like communication itself. my main problem with the poem was the over-use of adjectives: "melodius, lilting aphrodisiac construction of ear edifices erected in the heart"? i can't see that, it's too much. in my opinion, too many adjectives clutter the noun. be more selective. kill your darlings! it's important to paint a clear picture, but the reader gets to the point where they're like, "ok, i get it, let's move on".
07-29-2002 Lyle Berry    

Wonderful sensory images and a lyrical quality that I enjoyed thoroughly.
07-29-2002 Melissa Rives    

No matter how one must say it.....to not say it at all....well it will continue to fester...creativity must find a way out! Another excellent write! Beautifully done!
07-24-2002 Peggy Bertrand    

unto the soul,,,,,,,,,,,,,beautiful word usage...
07-23-2002 Nancy Pawley    

William, this is music for teh heart and soul..just beautiful.
Nancy
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