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The Real Me
by Dian Bagent (Age: 21)
copyright 07-31-2002
Contest Winner

Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
What I hide,
Is what you will not see,
Until you know,
The lonely girl inside of me.
The lonely girl I try to hide,
Way down deep inside.

Beneath my appearance the secrets lie,
Behind my eyes I softly cry.
Behind my smile, I silently scream.
Behind the comments is sarcasm that's mean.
Beneath the so-called perfect life,
I struggle with my pain and strife.

So please don't judge me until you know,
about the seeds of pain I gently sew.
About the lonely girl inside of me,
who only wants to be able to see,
the happiness that my appearance shows.

Please get to know her,
for she is sad and insecure,
Please be her friend and maybe you will see,
that the lonely little girl is the real me.




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05-16-2003 Leanne W.    

Wow! That's a great poem!!
01-19-2003 Debra Rose    

Such a sweet poem,and so sad. Hopefully, someday, you will find someone to know just who you are, and love no matter what.
01-01-2003 Heather Franz    

wonderful write, I know.... (go sailor moon!) very well done, bring out those emotions :)
08-31-2002 Sarah S.    

I thought this was really good work
08-16-2002 Irina Guschina    

Dear dear Dian!
Lonely girl... Always lonely girl inside woman...
The fate of REAL POET.
Yes, your poem is Best!
Thank you!
Irina Guschina.
08-09-2002 Les Heywood    

Well deserving of the win. I think many people can relate to this poem. I know I can. As a father I strive to be the "rock" of the family so I tend to keep my "emotional" side supressed. But, hey, here at PnP you can be what you want to be. And those feelings you don't express always make for a good poem - just like here!
08-03-2002 Jessica Conley    

That poem was beautiful. It expresses so much sorrow. I love poems like that. I think you deserve to win.
08-01-2002 William Robbins    

Your verse does inspire and help to remind of all the feelings we don't always see.
07-31-2002 Robert Betts    

Welcome back Dian, missed you :) That is excellent work!
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