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On-line Romance
by Debra Rose (Age: 21)
copyright 08-03-2002


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
This peice was originally titled "In love, or in love with being in love?" After reading over it a few times, I realized the mistake of the title and renamed it with a better suiting one.


My heart thumps heavily in my chest
Your name on my screen as I await your words
You've distracted my thoughts from a broken heart
And stitched together it's shattered remains.
I stare patiently at the little box
That contains our simple conversation
Speaking of mediocre concerns
Such as school starting and books.
And I await you to take up my innocent offer
Of meeting for the first time
"The movies sound great but what to see?"
You actually accept my invitation
And though we haven't met yet for real
I've seen your beautiful face
Raven black hair and amazing hazel eyes
Feminine yet strong beyond grace.
Yet I fear when we meet will it work just as well?
Will you be disappointed in what you see?
My parents can't know of our budding hope
For us as two females they wouldn't accept.
But who cares about restrictions
Or their homophobic fancies
Because I feel as if I've known you forever
And I will have you at their consent or none.
Because while I'm afraid of all this
It's only because I've been hurt
But I already put my faith in you
Could you have actually melted my crystalized heart?
Could I be falling in love?


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06-22-2004 Misty Montier    

Would that at age 18, I could have put into my anguish, hopes, desires...as well as you. You have such an old spirit, and such a wonderful, earnest way with words. No fears, no worries...alas, brave, is all I can say. I truly enjoyed reading this poem..


12-02-2003 Paul Kangas    

ya' maybe be inlove, lol.


08-05-2002 Nancy Pawley    

Debra, this poem lets the reader feel all the emotions you're going through..
real love is not merely spoken with words, but follwed up with actions.
Nancy


08-03-2002 Bob Church    

Quite a mature portrayal for someone of limited years. *smile* I didn't mean that as a put-down, by the way. Your poem is very expressive of your hope, your hurt, and your resolve. I wish you well...


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