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Longings
by Heather Lynn McDanel (Age: 21)
copyright 08-10-2002
Contest Winner

Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
Sitting here in stillness
Darkness turns to light
Shes up again and crying
A rather common sight
I’ll just sit and dream
Of days yet to come
When my whole existence
In this house is done
Sweet dreams of release
To a place that I can stand
Where my constant torture
Is not so close at hand
So I’ll just sit here dreaming
Cause dreamings all I have
It calms the horrid stares
And soothes me like a salve
So when you see someone
Who looks troubled as can be
Please don’t stop to help her
That girl you see is me




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09-22-2002 Nan Jacobs    

I can see why this won, Heather.
I'm thinking your definition of "crappy" is WAY different than mine? :-) nice work, and glad to have you here!
nan ~:-)
09-08-2002 Lonnie Kornoely    

Great poem and congratulations on your win.
09-07-2002 Melissa Rives    

congratulations on your win! An excellent poem indeed!
09-01-2002 Robert Betts    

First Heather, Congratulations on your win ! Next, you need to modify your bio and that out the part about your poetry being 'crappy' 'Crappy' poetry never wins at Pnp :)
bob
08-28-2002 Robert Betts    

It is a very nice and touching poem, rhyme and meter flow nicely. Yes and welcome to PnP.

bob
08-11-2002 William Robbins    

Welcome to PnP. This was such a wonderful poem, please keep sharing.
08-10-2002 Heather Lynn McDanel    

I don't know if you will ever read this again seen as where this is my little section or whatever you call it but thank you very much for saying that
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