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:D I loved it! From start to finish I had this big stupid smile on. I have two forms of the 'stupid smile' one that relates to infinite imagination or insanity and the second that awakens when I attempt flirting. Why I say 'attempt'? Cuz I suck, that's why. XD
For the poem! I don't come across many poems like this and when I do they usually make me wanna puke. Thus, I really enjoyed this. ^-^ I always say there's some sort of melting pot in my head. But I do like to think I make up some good sci-fi/fantasy plots. Though I often make them very complex. XD Anyway, great work on this one!
I like this poem quite a bit. I like particularly the ending. The first three stanzas are not particularly moving by themselves, but then the end leaves a kind of challenge. It makes me open myself to my imagination. The break of the last line from the rhythm of the poem, in my opinion, helps the poem, by jarring the reader out of complacent reading and forces an openess to the final question.