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Silver Moon
by Shannon Jaime (Age: 19)
copyright 08-18-2002


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Silver moon, silver moon,
Shimmer in the indigo night;
Silver spark, silver spark,
Cast your bright and luminous light.

Silver wing, silver wing,
Spiral the sparkling fire of stars;
Silver marble, silver marble,
Reflect the secrecies of afar.

Silver blaze, silver blaze,
Splash diamond surf upon the sky;
Silver sphere, silver sphere,
Pervade the dark and shine right by.

Silver streak, silver streak,
Cascade across pallid of cloud;
Silver phantom, silver phantom,
Envelop all in your mystery shroud.

Silver orb, silver orb,
Embrace the land in endless beam;
Silver shard, silver shard,
Preserve the memory of iridescent dream.


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10-18-2007 Leigh G.    

This was a nice little piece with good imagination and passed my initial "eww, a cheerful poem!" little dislike block. XD I should probably make this my last comment...consuming a large amount of sugar in the not far past has gotten my hyper. *bounces around* To think I was ready to fall asleep not long ago. XD

Okay! The poem! I like how you repeated all the silver items/forces you were describing and how you described a small fragment of a larger story with each reprise. Plus, your choice of words was refreshingly original so that is another bonus cookie you get. ^-^ Good work!


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P.S. By the time I finished it I found it more nostalgic than cheerful anyway. >.<
01-01-2004 Alixandria W.    

GREAT
03-22-2003 Janet Owenby    

Love this one has beautiful imagery, a talented poet you are my Little lady.
09-06-2002 Elizabeth Schalchlin    

I really loved your imagery, but I didn't like the repeating at the beginning of every line, it broke the flow, I thought. Maybe you should use pronouns instead or something. Otherwise I thought it was really awesome.
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