Life is Good
by
Denny Sisson
(Age: 79)
copyright 08-29-2002
Age Rating: 10 to 127
Life is Good
My memory is going, I don’t hear so good.
I have a potbelly but don’t eat much food.
Didn’t use to be like this. Don’t know what happened.
My body is a wreck compared to what it has been.
I don’t have much energy, I move pretty slow.
I only go places I have to go.
Each afternoon you can catch me nappin.
My body is a wreck compared to what is has been.
My mind says do it to all that I see
This curbing my actions just isn’t me
My kids are all working, the grandkids are rappin
My body is a wreck compared to what it has been
All is well with my soul.
When my life is over I’m sure it will still be
My body is a wreck compared to what it will be.
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Yes, so true Denny. Our mortality always catches up with us. At 56, I feel my age...but you're just as right in saying, the soul is forever young. Nicely done.
Gregory
Oops. I misconstrued the meaning of your poems end. I still like the flip of outlook. From back to forward, and now the optimism of improvement on its way.
Good poem. I like what you did there with the end... making now the oint when things are better when compared to what's coming. I also really like the loose rhymes with "has been."