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Solitary Winds
by William Robbins
copyright 08-25-2002


Age Rating: 18 to 127

  Solitary Winds
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Alone,
in the richness of my treasure closet
filled with murky mental vestments,
gratefully isolated from the chains of traitorous smiles
and lips preaching love as they wound,
I am aloft with inhales of surrender,
ferried in a brain cell sailboat
on a current of pastel moods
that propels me over a waterfall of chimera.
Tasting the psychedelic flow,
my aliveness
twists and threads itself
through a revolving door
between
bleached dimensions
and guarded hisses of madness.
Slumber only folds itself into my eyes
when I've nuzzled
both plains
of surrealistic thickets.


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09-28-2002 Audrey Sullivan    

You need togetherness to be lost.


08-28-2002 Cristina Lipp    

I am still caught in the 'murky mental vestments'. What a beautiful picture. I felt like I was on a canvas of pastel, with butterflies and waterfalls.

Write another one!


08-27-2002 Maralee Gerke    

This poem shows the thin membrane that separates sane and insane. A very good write William. I like a poem that I have to read twice.


08-27-2002 Melissa Rives    

Another sweeping poem...paintings in the mind....I love this....and I especially like the phrase "Slumber only folds itself into my eyes..." Wow! Fantastic, as always!


08-26-2002 Peggy Bertrand    

William

See your still writing with all the really neat verses."Tasting the psychedelic flow, " nice flow as always...
Peggy


08-26-2002 Aaron Schmookler    

William, I dig. It's a great voyage and pulls me easily along.


08-25-2002 Nancy Pawley    

I especially enjoyed these lines..
'I am aloft with inhales of surrender,
ferried in a brain cell sailboat
on a current of pastel moods
that propels me over a waterfall of chimera.
Tasting the psychedelic flow, '
Nancy



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