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My Fish
by Jeniffer Brand (Age: 38)
copyright 09-08-2002


Age Rating: 18 to 127

 
Why do I love you so much?
Why do I care?

Because it's your touch!
Because it's your stare!

I do miss your feel.
I do miss your smile.

So don't be cold as an eel!
Stick around for a while!

:-)


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03-08-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

I'm a dog person. I can understand the love one feels for one's pets! This is a cute poem and I enjoyed the read. Thanks, Anthony
09-15-2002 Dixie Kincaid    

That was good an enjoyable reading. First one I ever read about a fish. You brought it across quite well. DIXIE LEE
09-08-2002 Elizabeth Schalchlin    

Hey Jen, welcome, welcome, welcome. I thought this poem was very cute BUT the all caps approach seems inapropriete for the message. This seems like a cute little piece that should be relaxed and make your audience smile. Using all capital letters makes the reader (well, me at least) very uncomfortable, it's very abrasive. If you are going for that feel then you did a great job, but if you want your audience to be comfortable then I would suggest reaccessing your use of capitalization! :)
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