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I like it! I like squirrels, but I guess it would be no fun if they bit you! I didn't know that squirrels weren't rabid either, so I guess I learned something.
Megan C.
Hah! I like this, it's cute! I didn't know squirrels weren't rabid. But then, I have a long way to go from becoming a veterinarian. Did I spell that right? Anyway, great write! Hey that rhymes!
Cute! You've gotta watch those squirrels! I sit and watch them entice my kitties up trees all day long. Then, when the cat gets up there, it jumps to another tree, barking and laughing at my kitty.
I once was feeding ducks at a pond and I felt a tug at my pantleg.. it was a begging squirrel! LOL.
Good luck in the contest. Debbie
funny poem! some suggestions though:
some of the lines sound weird like 'They were all around me looking at it, these guys!' The rythm could use some work too. i really like it though! i like how you jokingly say have a beer ^.^
Lisa
And they seem like such cute little things in the storybooks! This is cute, fun to read, especially knowing that it actually happened.
One small critique: I noticed that some parts of the poem are written 'past tense' and some are written 'present tense'. If you would use only one or the other, it would read better.
Wild animals are just that, wild! You must always beware. You got lucky that the squirl did not do more damage. This was fun to read, but I bet it hurt! Thanks, Anthony
lol!! This reminds me of the time my cat Oskar brought home a squirrel!! Still alive! It freaked, and ran around the kitchen before jumping out the window. But squirrels scare me... they watch me all the time... hehe..heh....
I've been terroized by mice! They're cute, but when they invade the house, watch out, it's like an invasion. Squirrels are similar. Surprising this squirrel got that close to you.
Talk about a real life experience,which had to have happened. Never had that before . It was a very fun read. I look forward to reading of more of your experiences or ones that sound like acual experiences. DIXIX LEE
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