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At Your Alter

by Elizabeth Schalchlin (Age: 29)
copyright 09-25-2002


Age Rating: 10 +

In the sweet silence of the dawn I lie still,
wondering how I came to find myself here,
at your alter,
offering my soul to you as my sole precious possession
worthy of your glory.






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        09-28-2006     Tammy Frascona        

When you enjoy all God has to offer in this beautiful world, you truly become worthy. Nice write Elizabeth. I like the simplicity of this and the magnitude it contains in just a few words.

        10-09-2002     Cristina Lipp        

Elizabeth;

This is well-written. With very few words you conveyed the whole picture and captured the imagination.

        09-26-2002     Christopher Doss        

Short yes, but I feel you completed your thought or feeling in the few words. I read it several times--very nice.
Chris

        09-25-2002     Dixie Kincaid        

Short could be clarified a little more. Or it takes more of a magination than what I have. DIXIE LEE



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