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Motel Room
by Cristina Lipp
copyright 10-06-2002


Age Rating: 16 to 127

 
Inside this room
With sweet intent,
In measured time
Our passion spent.
Two tortured souls
That know no peace.
Two lovers hungry for release.

Between these walls
We've hidden dreams;
We've buried moments,
Stifled screams.
We've carved our future;
Signed our doom
And sealed it in a motel room.

The orange neon's
Flashing eyes
Sole witness to
Our wordless cries,
burnt images captured in time
Etched on life's canvas;
Your fate and mine.

A promise born
of twisted lies
Can't face daybreak
And so it dies.
As raindrops strike
A sad refrain,
We plan our rendezvous again.

İCristina Lipp 2002




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07-01-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

Very sad. Like the old story of hell that preachers used to preach... thirsty for something you'll never receive, striving after a dream that will never be. How very sad indeed.

And thank you for commenting on my story. :-)
11-06-2002 Lyle Berry    

A superb piece, reminiscent of The Amazing Rhythm Aces: "Low Rent Rendezvous" a radical c&w favorite of mine. I can relate to this one, having experienced exactly the depicted scenario, although none too proudly. Nevertheless, I reminisce of it fondly, in my elder years. My one daring escapade in an otherwise dull life. It is an aspect of many mdoern adult lives. Best Regards,
Lyle
10-07-2002 William Robbins    

It takes a true poet to turn a motel room into a masterful skillfully expressed poem.
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