I can't remember anything from coming threw the time warp. I opened my eyes. It was colder than I could drem. Snow nd ice whipped my face cutting it. I heard something behind me. It was Brev she had fallen behind. She walked slowly. "Serena!" She cried. I walked next to her. "We'll mke it don't worry."
"No it's not that. It's the others they haven't gotten here yet." She was crying but her tears froze in a second. "Don't worry they will." Helios was gone. I never saw him anywhere. "I felt something behind me. slit feeling of warmth. I turned around. There I saw it. It was everyone. Brev gsped she ran into the arms of Leone. I ran into Darien's. We walked for another hour not talking or anything. Everyone was quite. Even Mina. I stopped. "Wait a second." I froze with fear. I felt something evil. "OVER THERE!" Raye yelled before me. It was a large castle. Cold and dark. I looked at it long and hard until we came to the steps. I had never seen this place before. But then I rembered it. Thsi was Crystal Tokyo! I gasped. I sat down in the snow to cry. My tears froze but I kept crying
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