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White Whispers
by Jessie Baldwin (Age: 20)
copyright 12-13-2002


Age Rating: 4 to 127

 
I hear the White Whispers,
sweet, clean, and pure.
Oh how beautiful their voice's sound.

Their faces are unknown to me,
yet I know they are kind.
Their voices, full of wisdom and peace.
They teach me, they help me,
they fill me with joy.

Oh White Whispers, speak to me.
I long to hear your voices.
So peaceful, yet mournful.
Full of bitter sweetness.

White Whispers, dear, sweet White Whispers.
Can you hear them?
Listen......

Listen not with your ears,
but with your heart.


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06-30-2003 Riley M.    

a very pretty, and deep poem ^-^ keep it up
01-07-2003 Haley Thistle    

(Sigh hands clasped)I wish I had white whispers
12-27-2002 Tom Harrison    

I can almost hear the whispering in my heart. Good job.
12-23-2002 Heather Lynn McDanel    

Nice poem I liked it
12-21-2002 Esther Spurrill    

Maybe I'm not making sense to you about this line, but "Oh how beautiful their voice's sound" is grammatically incorrect. It should read "Oh how beautiful their voices sound" or "Oh how beautiful is their voices' sound." The first means the voices sound beautiful and the second means the sound of the voices is beautiful. I hope that made sense.
12-16-2002 Esther Spurrill    

This is an awesome poem, but it still needs a little editing. As I mentioned before, "their voice's sound" should read "their voices sound" and "Full with bitter sweetness" is grammatically incorrect. It should be "Filled with bitter sweetness" or "Full of bitter sweetness."
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