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Fall Haiku
by Lyle Berry (Age: 61)
copyright 11-14-2002


Age Rating: 18 to 127

  Fall Haiku
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Winter sharpens claws
Beneath the guise of Autumn
Pensive for first slash


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04-29-2006 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

Spring mends Winter's wounds
A tender salve for healing
Ready for Summer!

What could I say
that would let you know
How very much I enjoyed this?
Not nearly what I should,
for words are never good... enough.

Instead, I arranged a humble few,
in hopes of letting you know and convincing you,
that I really enjoyed your poem today,
I liked what how you said it and what you had to say!
01-23-2003 John Griffiths    

Nice imagery, more true to Haiku than most! season word. My only doubt is 'pensive', though it's hard to explain why. something more of waiting, crouching, tensing would complete it. (and a little punctuation! - or absence might be the local custom?)I liked it very much.
11-15-2002 Nancy Pawley    

I liked this haiku very much, Lyle.
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