Shadow of a man
by
Walter Jones
(Age: 63)
copyright 01-11-2003
Age Rating: 13 to 127
Within the good that carries me
stands the shadow of a man
Inside all that is true
is a fool who thinks he understands
and you who wander aimlessly through
the darkness of this land
are the chosen one
that only god can understand
so pick up your bow throw your rock
and step into the sun
the race is good and man is here
and it looks like
for today
he has won
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Why no one has bothered to give this amazing poem any prais points I cannot for the life of me figure out.
AMAZING WRITE. Your meaning really struck true to me. Maybe you could put in a couple of capital letters at the begining of the lines. I think it would make a greater impact that way, but it was amazing nevertheless.