Good-bye at Last
by
Farrah Tate
(Age: 30)
copyright 07-08-2001
Age Rating: 18 to 127
Comply with chance
Dance with danger
For the rhythmic affection
Of yet another stranger
Stranger than the perpetual spin
Of my peripheral-vision-gone-by world
Colder than the ice of her last breath good-bye
Fleeting its heartless foot-prints
Upon my ego's eye
Not so surprised to see her go
She's just one of many in a rather significant row
Of yester-years and tears of dismay
In this weighted dice
Of life without success
That's left me with
A baited arsenic of trust at best
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Just so that you know this is not about me. It's about someone I am close to whose story is very sad.
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"Comply with chance
Dance with danger
For the rhythmic affection
Of yet another stranger"
I liked that. Hmm.. gosh. I wrote a really LONG and intense poem about some of the same thoughts you've written about. I wonder how it would go over here tho. I'll have to think about that one. Thanks for sharing this, and I hope your friend is doing well.