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04-23-2007
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
Good work, Mary! I can relate to a lot of this poem, and even for the parts I can't relate to were great. I noticed a little rhyming here and there, too. :) Want to know something interesting? I think of your poem "Green" every few days...that one has stuck with me just like SamiJo M's Sea of The Lost... Arg, I got a little random there! I'm back to reading your poems. :) I didn't see any spelling or grammar errors, and not having to rant about capitalization is a nice change... I've made around 1200 comments, and in 600 of them I probably was complaining about capitalization! Great choice of words and structure in this one, it flowed wonderfully! I can't say "keep 'em coming" until I catch up to your recent stuff. :D Great work!
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11-13-2006
Richard Reed Jr
It's most difficult to believe in life or love's illusions.
My faith is all I have to go by,
and sometimes it wears thin, but I must keep going the miles before I sleep.
Good write,
Thank You,
Rich
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11-21-2005
David Pekrul
Four years have gone by since this write. I hope all is still well with you. You have written this from the heart and it shows.
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06-19-2005
Anthony Lane Stahlhut
You write in many styles, just as I do. New things are fun, but I never give up on the old either( because I'm Old). I believe if you are happy with what you know about yourself that it shows to those that look! Thanks, Anthony
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04-01-2001
Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
Wooo HooO! Someone noticed the rhyming! *BIG HUGS TO YOU!!!* You just made my day! (*grin*)
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04-01-2001
Robert Betts
For those who didn't notice, check out the rhyming scheme. It is very well done!
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04-01-2001
Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
Unfortunately, no Billy. He did NOT understand nor believe me any more than he did before. Oh well, his loss. I've spent nearly fifteen years of my life trying to please him and make him happy. It didn't work. I've got two wonderful boys out of it tho, for that I'm happy. I'll spend the next fifteen years on them and I. *smile* Gosh, it sure feels good to find self esteem!
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04-01-2001
Beverley McInnis
Bravo! What incrediable strength is coming through clearly in this poem. Way to make a statement!!
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