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A Walk
by Walter Jones (Age: 62)
copyright 01-10-2003


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
Three of us
went walking through
the shadows of my mind
Two were good friends
the third my life sign

Corridors are narrow
and the path a maze
two of us just stop
in awe of this place

My life sign
he just pushes on
for him there is no narrow
just the open rung

Windows locked and shuttered
doors all closed tight
two us were willing
and still there is a fight

A kiss upon my forehead
a squeeze of my hand
a smile even a child
could understand

My path is never set
I'll change my ways


Three of us
went walking
in the shadows
of my mind

only one returned
it was my life sign

My god, the bottle,
lay broken in the street
my life had passed before me
and died at my feet

Today I stand alone
no crutches, need I

For now
I walk alone
in the shadows of my mind


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03-11-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

This walk some of us make. I wrote a poem called, "Insecurities" it also talks about fighting inner deamonds. Thanks, Anthony


02-01-2003 Giulio Iacobini    

very well done ... great!!!!!!


01-19-2003 Danielle Laukhart    

Great job on the poem I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!1


01-10-2003 William Robbins    

Wonderful poem with great images and summons a variety of thoughts and moods for the reader.


01-10-2003 Walter Jones    

Thanks Ellen, for the last line... great feed
Walt


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