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Maze
by Beverley McInnis
copyright 07-14-2001


Age Rating: 18 to 127

 
grey darkens light
sweet roses break forth
through broken pavement
rain shatters
as icy hail plummets to
the ground
hearts broken
a wolf howls
pity the mouse who chases the cheese
only to be caught by the cat
dripping blood
a vampire cries
for the rose
which is dead
in the darken grey
of
snow


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08-27-2001 John Mcleod    

I absolutley LOVED this Bev, these lines were brilliant, "sweet roses break forth
through broken pavement
rain shatters
as icy hail plummets to
the ground"

Pure genius!

jm



04-01-2001 Beverley McInnis    

Robert, it is written this way for a purpose. Being a very symbolic poem, the structure needs to reflect the symbolism contained within the poem. I definitely do understand how it does take time to analyze and how it can be difficult to read. This is one of my pure symbolic poems. Basically its a reflection of a manic/depressive state of mind which arises from living in an abusive enviornment.

I usually don't explain my poems, as I'd rather people interpet as they feel/choose. With this one though, I think its ok to give a bit of insight.

Thank you for taking the time to analyze and comment. I really appreciate it!
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