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02-12-2009
Martha Rosanbalm
Very nice poem. Your work has life and is really meaningful. I can feel your words.
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04-23-2007
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
This vaguely reminds me of my poem, "A While". I wrote the poem A While back in 2006, but it still feels like yesterday. I'm so sentimental...might want to ignore my ramblings some time! The idea, while it's been used many times, was refreshingly worded and expressed in this poem. Your descriptions and comparisons were top notch, and I don't need to rant about caps! Don't ask me why this kind of poem that does more than hints to love doesn't bother me but your last poem's reference and theme of love drive my wacko...I'm an odd on, arigato. Great work, keep the poems coming! I'm having a heckuva time catching up though! :D
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04-18-2005
Christopher Carlson
You know that being a poet means you are able to take and remember things not just for the sake of remembering, but that you are able to make your reader close their eyes and smell, hear, taste, or feel what you are writing about.
It is very neat that you do the same thing I do when a loved one is not around. When Rachel is not near at hand I can close my eyes and take a deep breathe and instantly I smell and can even feel her touch or hear her voice. At times this is the only sanity I have to keep me going on really rough days.
I can feel your thoughts here. Great Job!
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08-17-2004
Jane Lee
Wow this is soo.. I can't describe it! But soo spirit-lifting!
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08-12-2004
Sarah Barrett
Oh my gosh! this is awesome!I love this poem! you are a wonderfull poet. I am glad you put this in my contest. Though it is a very hard decision.
Sarah b.
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04-01-2001
Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
Robert... I feel mine will. Finally, they will~! Thanks so much for reading, and sharing, for writing, and caring!
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