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Not a story just an idea, To My Sons Chris & Paul
by Walter Jones (Age: 62)
copyright 03-21-2003


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Authors note:

When I was 13, my father had passed a way. He had spent the last 5 years of his life in treatment center for TB. He had been allowed to come home about 6 months before he died. I never knew how he felt about me. On my son Paul's 12th birthday and my son Christophers 13th birthday, I had clock plaques made for each of them.

That was 10 years ago. A friend at
work recently mentioned he wished his father would have told him how he felt about him before he died.

I share these with you in hopes that you may leave a letter or two for your children.
*******************************************************

Christopher Shawn Jones

I named you after the patron saint of the wander, the pawn broker. In the eyes of some he is just a legend. He carried Christ and the sins of the world across a small river. You carry the nick name pumpkin, bestowed on you by the nurse who helped deliver you, you also carry the responsibility of doing the good I have not completed. You are strong willed and self directed, you will succeed. You have the very special gift of internal motivation use it wisely. You are my crutch. I turn to you when I need strength, when I need an honest answer, as to what I am
how I look, what I have done, you hold back nothing, you are my mirror, you are my reflection. Christopher be the man God intended, you will be a servant to the world. I love you, dad.

*******************************************************

Paul Joushua Jones

You are the sunshine of my life. From the moment you were born, you have given me the rays of hope, faith and love. When I am sad you find a way to make me smile. You repeat the words, I tell you, "remember the Jesus way"; you direct me with my own words. You remind me of my obligations, you hold me accountable, to the good I preach you to do. You push me to the limits. Yours is the voice I carry with me, your faith is the drive that keeps me going. I love you Paul, dad.


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11-03-2006 Deborah Thomas    

Wonderful tribute to your sons.
I think we all know at least one man who did not have the opportunity to hear these words from their father. I am most grateful to watch my husband and son(age 26), show affection without the restraint observed throughout history.
No doubt your words have made a difference in your sons lives.
Reminiscent of the blessings bestowed in the Bible from father to son.
Beautiful.
Debbie


11-03-2006 Walter Jones    

This is old Chris is now 25 and Paul 24, still they keep the plaques for all to see, Walt


09-18-2004 Paula T.    

Wow.
Christopher and Paul are very lucky to have a father like you!
It was a very interesting write, brought on mixed emotions...



01-02-2004 Caitlin M.    

WOW! Now that's a loving family!


07-21-2003 Irina Guschina    

What a fond and deep words... Christopher and Paul are happy sons! They are happy to have the father like you. You are happy to have two sunbeams of your life, Walt.
Maybe, it interests you, I have the same idea and I was beginning my "Notes To You, Alexander". There are just 4 notes to my son. I will continue. My son still not knows about these notes.
Thank you for the sharing your feelings.
Irina.


05-25-2003 Nadia Emanuel    

really touching...your sons are lucky, and you should know that your father loved you too...all fathers do love their children, yet show it in different ways


03-22-2003 Robert Betts    

A wonderful idea, Walter. :) I really love it. and I hope they bothe see and that this brings them closer to you. :)
bob


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