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04-23-2007
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
Zut, I'm so slow...I had to read this twice before I really realized what was going on! This is an interesting piece, totally different from what you'd expect from the title. While you're respecting some corny poem (no offense!) you get a dark poem! Not bad at all! Quite good, actually. This is one situation, although in a cosmic sense I've experienced it, I never really...I don't know. It's a situation I still can't relate to, even though I kinda experienced something similar. Alright, I'm rambling...rambling terribly, too! Anyway, your flow was great in this piece! Although I'm slow and had to read it twice before I realized what was going on, I still enjoyed it. Keep writing Mary, great work!
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12-12-2006
BJ Niktabe
Such a sad story behind this poem! I could feel the tears in your eyes, and the ache in your heart. The emotions you were feeling came through so well in this write, as you usually do. I'm guessing that the main character in this poem was "the other woman," or maybe an "ex" girlfriend or wife who was having a hard time letting go of a relationship that was so obviously over. (been there, done that) So congratulations to you on Congratulations! Even your old writes are worth reading today! :) Love ya!
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12-24-2004
Anthony Lane Stahlhut
Ouch
so true,but painful too! Thanks, Anthony
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04-01-2001
Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
Why are you so sweet? *smile* Thank you!
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