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Leigh Gilholm Fisher
Although I cannot relate in the slightest, and have no incline how one would feel in this situation for my one pathetic experiences with matters of the heart I've tried to squash out of my head for...nearly a year now, with all by goodbyes rejected and being manipulated so it looked like I was holding on and I can only blame myself, I still enjoyed this piece. Forgive that little bout of rambling; check out my poem Liar if you want to hear the rest of my rambling put in a poetic way on that topic... Anyway, good work Mary! There are many ways to view this piece; but I don't really know what they are since I have no experience...
Leigh of the Commenting Community
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11-12-2005
Anthony Lane Stahlhut
He left you with the ring around the tub! Life is funny sometimes and then sometimes it takes awhile to finally laugh
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04-01-2001
Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
Thank you John! *smile* Hope you have a great day!
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04-01-2001
John Mcleod
After reading your work and the other comments I came up with the thought that if he was leaving anyway then he could not have realized what a great inventive mind you have.
Great poem which was well written.
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04-01-2001
Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
Bunny: *giggles* That's quite alright. If you mistakenly thought one of my pieces were Robert's... I can only be flattered as he's an excellent writer!! No apologies neccessary. I'm glad you read my work, and comment as well. The comments always mean so much to me. PS: Thanks for encouragement as well. I am so happy! SO VERY HAPPY. I'll be writing more freely on the subject in a month or two. Hugs around to all.
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04-01-2001
Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
WOW! Thank you so much~! You know what? You are the ONLY person that has commented with that view. I thought perhaps I was the only one out here who felt this way. *grin* Nice to know I'm not alone. He was leaving by the way, had an "escape" savings when I met him, and had already spoken to a lawyer. But then again, what was that you said? I don't need to justify!!! I am happy, by the way. VERY happy. :) (Finally) *grin*
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