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The history of Serena's love
Chapter 1
by Sarah West (Age: 19)
copyright 01-21-2003


Age Rating: 7 to 17

 
This story is about how Serena and Darien first met each other on the moon, and how Byrel became evil.
I hope you will like the story, and please comment on my work.....

The Royal family of the Earth are visiting the Royal family on the moon for the first time, every one on the moon is getting ready for this big celebration.
"They had arived my queen"said a black talking cat "well, welcome them in Luna" "yes queen Serenity". "Princess Serena!" called the queen of the moon..."Yes mother?" answered a beutiful princess from upstairs,and she had a moon on her forehead, her name was Serena. "Come on down my dear we are going to be lait for the feast, and its not nice to be lait." "A FEAST?... how come no one told me about it?.. is there going to be alot of goodies?" The princess came running from up stairs "haaagup...aaahhh!" princess Serena tripped and fell on another talking cat "Ouch!" the cat shouted "sorry Arttemis, are..are you ok?" "as ok as a cat can be after, being crashed by a human, after a very very very busy day" answered the cat. "oh oh oh Serena please please please dont clutz and fall infront of the people of Earth... I heard that tere will be a cute guy there and his name is prince Darien" said the queen "ok mom I will try my best."
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"nice to meat you king william, we are very happy to see you, we hope that you will like it here on the moon" said queen serinity "oh we are very happy to be here, oh aaam this is my son prince Darien he is the protector of the Earth" "nice to see you queen Serenity" "nice to meet you too prince Darien, say do you want to meet my daughter... princess Serena why dont you come and meet the prince" "yes mother".... Huh she is the most beutiful girl I have ever seen in my life, the prince was amaized by the princess and how she looked..... oh wow he is the cutest guy I have ever seen... "hi..my..my name is Serena" "and my name is Darien, I am very happy to see you my princess" the prince knealed down and kissed the princess' hand, and the princess was blushing.
Oh I think that the princess and I will be good friends, she is just so beutiful....

To be continued.....




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05-04-2006 Alma H.    

One more thing I would like to add. You need to capitalize "Queen" or names or the beginning of a sentence. The story is great with what the main thoughts but it is confusing to read. E-mail me when you correct a few things.(Sorry if I'm harsh)
Alma H.


11-02-2005 Alma H.    

I agree with Toni. Also in english, every time a person talks, thats a new paragraph even if its on word.( Sorry I'm an english dork);)


12-16-2003 Toni Sweeney    

This is really great. But you need to run a spell check and capatilize some of the words. This needes some major fixing. Please do that. You can use charlie that will help you find the spelling mistakes.
Toni S.


05-17-2003 Caitlin M.    

It is good except you need to edit your work. What I mean by that is check your spelling.


03-02-2003 Dorsey W.    

One of the best!Please keep commenting on BattleMania Sarah.


01-24-2003 Robert Betts    

The link at the bottom which says "Charlie" is a spell check. You have a number of misspelled words which need correcting. No, Charlie won't spell them for you but you can try them in the dictionary at the bottom of the Charlie page. I know it is a bit of work but that is how one learns to spell better.


01-22-2003 Haley Thistle    

Very good I enjoyed it


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