I'm Sorry
by
Jessalyn Hamby
(Age: 22)
copyright 02-12-2003
Age Rating: 13 to 127
I'm sorry
I'm ugly
And all that I am
I'm weak
I'm alone
I'm dark
And you hate me for that.....
I'm sorry
For being happy
I'm sorry
For being myself
I'm sorry
For ever being somebody
And you still hate me......
And you still hate me......
I'm sorry
For not being you
You took me....
And pushed me
Ripped me
Shattered my world
And you still hate me.......
And you still hate me.......
I bleed from fresh wounds
My eyes are forever broken......
You did what you had to
Isn't that enough?
You took what you needed
And you still feed off my misery....
And you still feed off my misery....
You still hurt me.....
You still hurt me.....
Have you had enough yet?
Or are you waiting till I run?
Until I give up?
I'm sorry
I'm ugly
I'm weak
And I'm not unique
I am nothing
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Your poem is so beautiful and touching, Jess, and if its about you, I have a comment that took me years to learn. You are not ugly or weak and that I KNOW! your not ugly because everyone is beautiful! (especially when they smile). And I know you're not weak because it took a lot of stregnth and courage to write and post this. Poeple will put you down, and its ok to cry, but when you're done, just remember that you are beautiful inside, and you uniqueness is what makes you special, no matter how wierd it might be! (lol)
PS now that i've learned that i feel a lot better about myself, i don't take people bad critisism to seriously, and I can seriously NOT distinguish between a guy whose "cute" and one whose not, and my friends give me strange looks because of that, but in the end we end up laughing it away. Everyone is beautiful, including you! :1
This is very beautifully written I love the style
and free flow of the words. Smile lifes a hard row to hoe but just tend the ground tenderly and eventually new happiness will grow. Loving your self is the first step.
If this is about you, my ever not so humble advice--grab hold of any and all good and do not let go. Your writing brought back a lot of my past, which is good because it helps me to see how much better things are now and reminds me of hopes of the future...Thank you for being able to share this. An awesome write
Jessalyn, I get the feeling this poem was written in much pain. The repetition of words is so typical of the state of mind where there is a sense of worthlessness. If it is repeated long enough, the mind starts believing it. I compliment you on writing your soul free. This is a beautiful poem. My prayer for you tonight is that you will continue doing this until sunlight kisses compete with starlight hugs to let you know just how special you are…and you are, because only a person with tender, loving heart can write this.
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