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I Don't know
by Eric Carrillo (Age: 28)
copyright 07-25-2001


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
What is wrong?
I don't know, or perhaps it hurts too much to say.
From day to day, I strive to be the best that I can be.
Lost I am, the direction I have set, the path is unknown.
The path is not smooth.
It is a forest full of predators.
Where the path leads, I do not know.
My mind, my thoughts are spinning fast!
Boldly I go along the path.
What I leave behind, I will not return to. What awaits, I do not
know, but,
I will soon find out.
The path, it's cold.
The path, it's rocky.
I long to know, what lies ahead.
Lost I am, my heart acheth.
What is wrong?
I do not know, or perhaps, it hurts too much to say...


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04-01-2001 Laryalee Fraser    

This is such a lonely cry, Eric....
yet there's strength in it - and hope!
Lary
04-01-2001 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

I love the first two lines (which are repeated at the end). They really make you think, eh? And you asked "if I have time" to read you? I will always make time to read good friend's writing, and good writing in itself deserves to be read! *smile and hugs* Take care you...
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