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02-17-2006
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
lol, this is cute. Good work, it's a funny story. Like David said though, it would be more fitting if it rhymed. Even though you need to fix a bit of grammar and such. It's a simple and short poem but, cute, good work. :)
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07-26-2005
David Pekrul
Good concept, but would probably be better if it was in rhyming form.
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08-26-2003
Anne Whelmer
Nice job!
~*anne*~
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02-12-2003
Jennifer Campbell-Kletzli
Very Cute!
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