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Time You Give Me Points To Ponder
by Susan E. Eskdale (Age: 38)
copyright 04-04-2001


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Time, you give me points to ponder,
When I was young I used to wander,
Along the paths so lush and green,
Drinking in all of the yet unseen.

Softness flowing all around,
Still nary making a sound,
Sweet air fills my lungs,
Oh how wonderful it is to be young.

Time, you give me points to ponder,
No longer those same trails I wander,
The paths are now paved,
Making me long for nature to be saved.

Loudness encloses all around,
Still deafening the sound,
Smog filled air fills my lungs,
Oh how I wish I were still young.

Time, you give me points to ponder,
In the future how I’ll wander,
Past the roads that once were paved,
Wondering what is left to save.

Softness flowing all around,
Somehow I’m not sure if there is sound,
Once again sweet air fills my lungs,
I know it will remind me of when I was young.


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07-24-2005 Paul Kangas    

This is a very beatiful and good poem.
03-11-2003 Emily Garwood    

thats excellent and really makes people think of whats happening today!

Emy
03-07-2003 Kay Lee Kelly    

Sweet memories, I loved reading this.
04-05-2002 Eileen Waldron    

A bittersweet beautifully written piece
04-01-2001 M.E. (Bunny) Eastveld    

Hey Susan, C'mon down to the old LB Ranch anytime, the only scents to clog your lungs here is horses. (and ..a little dust from the mudroad) Come BEFORE time runs out!! While you are still young enough to appreciate jade. Bunny



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