Home of: Prose, Poetry & Contests Prose-n-Poetry

Prose-n-Poetry.com

 Email Us [e-mail]
Enter our Poetry Contest and Win a Cash Prize !
Welcome !

Please Sign In
MemberID
password
Save Cookie?  
Get lost password

Join Us

Points Reference

NEW! PnP Contests
Member Contests
Contest Winners

Sailor Moon Home
Games

Members
Moonatics
Gold Writers
Silver Writers
Free Members

Galleries
Sailor Moon

Music
Sailor Moon
Christmas
Read !
Poetry
Stories
Books
Columns
Recipes
MoonNotes
Write !
Poetry
Stories
Books
Recipes
MoonNotes
Workshops
Poetry Workshop
Stories Workshop
Books Workshop
Reference
Poetry Help
Stories Help
F.A.Q

Programs
Sailor Moon Episodes
Banners
Resources

On Line
Plam Pluk
1 Writers

Gabriela Tridente
1 Free Members

2 Members
29 Guests

I miss you Daddy
by Ellis Garcia (Age: 20)
copyright 03-09-2003


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
I looked into your eyes
And all I saw was Love

I gave you a hug
And all I felt was warmth

I heard your voice
And I was sure I was in heaven

I saw you standing at the door
And I felt protected

I heard your Laugh
And I saw Life

I saw you asleep
And peace took over me

I saw you cry
And your tears melted my heart

I asked for a Goodnight Kiss
And I felt I was truly happy for the first time

I saw you leave
And it broke my heart

I saw you wave goodbye
And I missed your laugh

I Feel so sad
And so does Mom

Daddy I miss you
When are you coming back?


Spell Check Rhymer Poetry Analyst


Help Us Stop Plagiarism - Nearly all works at PnP are original. However a few people choose to plagiarize. To check, choose a phrase from the work, then either drag and drop to the search box or copy and paste. click on search and works at Google will be shown which match. Just to be sure, please do this before you recommend or rate the work highly...
Google
If you think this work is plagiarized please


Select a Random Work
from Poetry

Comments on this Article/Poem:
Click on the commenter's name to see their Author's Page

05-06-2008 Jade L.    

I know this doesn't sound right, but it's nice to know how that feels. I know how oneperson felt, but he wasn't quite like everyone else. Now I know what it's like to a regular person.
02-17-2006 Leigh G.    

Very dark, I'm a major dark writer and fan so I enjoyed this. It's a sad topic, and I know what's it's like to loose a loved one. I didn't loose my father, but I've lost many other important parts of my family. You may never see your father again but he will line on within your heart. The only thing that heals pain is time. It's slow, but it's life. You can lower the age rating a bit if you want though. Keep up the good work.
03-29-2003 Christina Martin    

My father died, so i can relate to this poem. nice job.
03-28-2003 Riley M.    

i cant say i know how you feel, but i think i do now after reading this beautiful poem
03-10-2003 Barry Clopton Lanier    

Heart warming and wonderful projection...great work.......
03-10-2003 Jensie B.    

Youre poem made me cry!It was so beautiful!I don't know what I'd do if I lost my daddy!

JENSIE
03-09-2003 Kay Lee Kelly    

Very good, a story told and thoughts
revealed
02-13-2003 Vicky Dewing    

The title of the poem caught my eye. I am so glad it did. What a beautiful poem written with so much pain. Keep your loving memories, they are yours and with the love of God, it will guide you through all times.
02-12-2003 Jennifer Campbell-Kletzli    

Wow. So sad. So good. It makes me want to cry...
Visitor Reads: 1043
Total Reads: 1192
Comments: 9

Author's Page

Email the Author

Add a Comment




Favorite of:


Send Page to a Friend
Points Reference Privacy
PnP Terms of Service Contact Us
  SEO Software

Visitors
View Stats