Home of: Prose, Poetry & Contests Prose-n-Poetry

Prose-n-Poetry.com

Email Us [e-mail]
Enter our Poetry Contest and Win a Cash Prize !
Welcome !

Please Sign In
MemberID

password
Save Cookie?  
Get lost password

Join Us

Points Reference

NEW! PnP Contests
Member Contests
Contest Winners

Sailor Moon Home
Games

Members
Moonatics
Gold Writers
Silver Writers
Free Members

Galleries
Sailor Moon

Music
Sailor Moon
Christmas
Read !
Poetry
Stories
Books
Columns
Recipes
MoonNotes
Write !
Poetry
Stories
Books
Recipes
MoonNotes
Workshops
Poetry Workshop
Stories Workshop
Books Workshop
Reference
Poetry Help
Stories Help
F.A.Q

Programs
Sailor Moon Episodes
Banners
Resources

On Line
Andrea P.
1 Writers

Gabriela Tridente
Jessica P.
Tera Hopkins
Shannon Dominowski
Melissa Adams
Linda Lynn
6 Free Members

7 Members
40 Guests

Cathy's challenge Boys with Toys, essay
by Walter Jones (Age: 62)
copyright 02-11-2003


Age Rating: 18 to 127

 
Since the beginning of time,
man has taken from man.
There is always a desire to
have what the other guys got.

Since the beginning institutions,
men justify taking what belongs
to other men.

Like gangs on our streets,
countries band together for
protection and justification,
for taking what belongs to others.

The wants of one out weighs
the needs of others.
In this country,
we use up the rest
of the world resources.

We are the king
of the hill;
standing tall for
the next person
to take a wack at.

My country right or wrong,
my life style,
be like me if you are
strong enough.

Take what you want,
live the good life,
set the bar,
what ever it takes.

Not just a few
but everyone is entitled.
You don’t need
to work for it, just take,
might makes right.

Words are written.
History sets the stage.
I defend my right to this life.
Fear forces me to take drastic steps.

War is the outcome
of years creating a life that is not
supported by the work done.

You threaten my safety, you can hurt me, I will hurt you first. My gang against your gang. Nobody wins, but I make you less of a threat to my way of life.
Death comes, the value of life, small cost for living comfortable, what are a few sons and daughters, I can always have more.

A mother cries,
A father dies,
A soldiers
Life is hard

My life or yours
No compromise
Outcome is war


Spell Check Rhymer Poetry Analyst


Help Us Stop Plagiarism - Nearly all works at PnP are original. However a few people choose to plagiarize. To check, choose a phrase from the work, then either drag and drop to the search box or copy and paste. click on search and works at Google will be shown which match. Just to be sure, please do this before you recommend or rate the work highly...
Google
If you think this work is plagiarized please


Select a Random Work
from Stories


Comments on this Article/Poem:
Click on the commenter's name to see their Author's Page

02-08-2008 Jordan Screws    

Like Herbert Hoover once said, "Old men declare war, but it is the young men that must die." or something like that. Anyway, you are right... right now a "might makes right" mentality pervades society. Power is measured in how quickly you can cut someone down using a gun, knife, fist, or words. If someone is weaker than you and they have something you want, feel free to wrest it from their clutches. The same seems to apply to politics and foreign affairs.

Fighting seems to be the quick and popular answer to problems, be it on the streets or in international politics. Nothing like a quick stomping to prove your point! Unfortunately, it is young men who must pay for the leader's pleasure of declaring war, because they end up on the front lines fighting for the cause. Sometimes the cause is just and other times it is questionable, but in either case people on both sides die. You illustrate that a soldier's life is indeed a hard lot.

Enough with my rambling. You have shown that it is easy to declare a war but hard to fight it. The last three lines really stick with me because that is warfare in a nutshell: you or them, no chance to negotiate. The line about "What are a few sons and daughters, I can have more..." sticks with me because it highlights a sad truth that the leaders civilian and military sometimes take towards soldiers: cannon fodder to be used and replaced, rinse and repeat as necessary until war outcome is decided. You have done well with exposing the unsavory side of warfare and the view of the average soldier... good work!


01-23-2007 Tammy Frascona    

~~~ Tammy F. of The Commenting Crusaders ~~~

I don't even have a response for this marvelous write!


03-14-2003 Kay Lee Kelly    

Ooutstanding, the old men bring the noise
the young men bring the toys.
great to read/


Visitor Reads: 656
Total Reads: 752
Comments: 3

Author's Page

Email the Author

Add a Comment




Favorite of:





Send Page to a Friend
Points Reference Privacy
PnP Terms of Service Contact Us
  SEO Software

Visitors
View Stats