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I'm Thinking Now
by Emily Garwood (Age: 21)
copyright 11-08-2003


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
I'm working myself to the limit,
wondering what i'm doing here,
trying to live a life,
being stopped and put down along the way.

I'm nervous to the point of breakdown,
i'm ready to snap,
break outta' my chains,
why do i feel i have to live?

I haven't got much,
no friends, no family,
nothing like that,
i don't need care, just let me live.

You've heard of wars,
there's one inside my head,
deciding if i live or not,
i need stability, not your dissin'.

Give me love, not your hate,
i'm not messed up,
just depressed, over the disrespect,
i respect you, can't you respect me?

It's driving me mad,
i'm all alone, hitching my way across the land,
people stop and stare,
haven't you ever seen a runaway?

I could be like you,
dissin' others thinking it's fun,
but i've been through that, it's not that fun,
if i find someone hurt, i'm still willing to help.

I'm helping you,
but you're not helping me,
i used to think you cared,
but that's gone, i know i'm alone.

So sue me, i hate you too,
but don't get mad, because your hating me too.
I fight alone and bring no others,
you need an army, that's just pride.

Your pride's large, and you can't afford to loose,
but if you keep on like this you will.
So hit me hard, i'm not afraid,
i've been through it before, and i can go again.

Your army's dead, my angers not,
you tore me apart, but here i still remain.
Just as hurt, and just as pained.
As the last time i fought my mind.


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03-17-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

ouch, don't let me make you mad! Thanks, Anthony


12-13-2003 Paul Kangas    

one word "AWSOME"


12-03-2003 Regina S.    

Totally awesome! You did an excellent job with the suspense, way to keep the reader on the edge of their seat!! :)
PS. I really like your title, you should think about stuff more often, check out the masterpieces that come out of it!!! ^-^


11-28-2003 Debra Rose    

Absolutely and completely amazing, Emi! The last three lines actually had me breathless. This is a beautiful peice of work, and I love how you don't captalize the I's, actually, because it does give the reader that small sense of self-worth. So sad, but so wonderful. Great job!


11-08-2003 Robert Betts    

Keep writing, Emy :)


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