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Empty Plains
by Kay Lee Kelly
copyright 03-07-2003


Age Rating: 1 to 127

 
Empty Plains

As far as you can see,
purple sage tumbleweed,
barren bitter sandy heap,
rusty dust rolling deep.

Thin line of sliver glows,
closer moving vision grows,
throbbing rumble cuts the air,
endless line of metal glare.

Heart and head feel the beat,
roaring in the desert heat,
double edged sound and light,
see the metal birds in flight.

Through day they web and flow,
vast migration hovers low,
fading into a thin pale strand,
wavering mirage in distant sand.

Echoes return the muffled moan,
plains are empty I am alone.


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03-11-2003 Lyle Berry    

Wonderful Kay Lee! In the lines "Heat and head feel the beat, roaring in the desert heat" did you intend "heart" and head? One other question from a senile old guy, are the "metal birds" jet aircraft? Lol! Don't you hate it when your readers are too dumb to understand? LOL!
I loved the mood and imagery of this one. Great as always.
Hugs!
Lyle
03-08-2003 Irina Guschina    

So marvelous picture! So much senses and thoughts inside it… “Echoes return the muffled moan, /plains are empty I am alone.” I am charmed. – Irina.
03-08-2003 Janet Owenby    

Wow I love this. Great Work
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