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Ugly
by Jessalyn Hamby (Age: 22)
copyright 07-11-2003


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
A girl I see in the mirror
She's seventeen
Four foot eleven
Hundred and three pounds

Dark purple hair, black tips
Green eyes
Black nails
Blood red lips

Heavy black eyeliner
Distracting wondering eyes
Keeping them from seeing whats inside
Protecting her from being discovered

Black baggy clothes
Hiding underneath
A hovering little body
Holding herself together

Red lipstick
Covering pale lips and scabs
Constant biting
Worrying and paranoia

Spikes, studs, and piercings
Giving off she's strong
Faking herself
Faking you

Cold and alone
Hovering in her solitude
Ugly and unknown
Ugly and alone


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12-01-2003 Caitlin M.    

Nice write, I liked it.


11-23-2003 Robert Betts    

After one reads the work, and then reads the comments, one realizes this is quite normal... normal that we are often unsure of ourselves. This work is tremendous in that context, with the interactions between writer and reader. It helps both...


07-24-2003 Heather Scott    

believe me, I know how you feel! This is a very moving poem.


07-16-2003 Christopher Doss    

This is a very moving poem.


07-13-2003 Sage B.    

great poem jessalyn ( cool name)


07-12-2003 Jonathan Donnely    

Too true, Too familiar. I have a lot of personal connections to this piece,whether that is a good thing or not.


07-11-2003 April S.    

I like this it's cool and a great poem.I also know what it feel to be like that.But mine's mostly because people do think i'm ugly becuase I don't fallow the others.And I don't wear frilly dresses and other things.My school the people there are still thinking that no one should wear anything diffrent or look diffrent.My bff litteraly told me I was the ugliest thing on earth and should jump off a bridge.I found a bff that treats me better so no need to worry.I'm talking about my self too much again.I love the poem.Keep up the great writting.


07-11-2003 Moses Hochstetler    

I don't know if this is about you, or not, but most of us tend to rate ourselves lower than what others see us. A few ego-maniacs think too highly of themselves. We all tend to put up little facades to show how "tough" we are, but in the end, we are what we think, what we feel, and what we do. What others think might affect us, but only if we allow it to change our thinking. Good write!
Moses


07-11-2003 Walter Jones    

Youth chasing adult, rebel, but remember, to enjoy
the trips along the way, it is good to remember when you are old. You are a gifted writer. Continue to put the words down, cleanse the soul, the beauty is not in the eye of the beholder, it is in the soul of the person being held.
Walt


03-27-2003 Kay Lee Kelly    

Memories live for ever, very well written.


03-27-2003 Janet Owenby    

I think you deserve a ten. So you get it.


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