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Uninvited
by Kay Lee Kelly
copyright 03-16-2003


Age Rating: 1 to 127

 
Uninvited
On this lonely stretch of shifting sand,
mean darkness hovers over the land.
Predictions gone terribly wrong,
beat the drum, loud and strong.

The specter creeps in obscure and slow,
so overlooked, how could we know.
His mantra faint at first, begins.
There is a monstrous prize to win.

Evil, evil, evil times three,
evil, evil, you listen to me.
Death must fall from the indifferent sky.
None shall speak, do not ask why.

Conscience in hand I turn away,
whisper unheard, my dread and dismay.
Our blue green globe in senseless distress,
Religions have been created from less.




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12-08-2003 Kristy R.    

Perfect, perfect, perfect this is exellent!!


12-01-2003 Paul Kangas    

Perfect, my rate! I agree with Gregory


06-29-2003 Gregory Christiano    

Well done. Looks like a new Religion is on the way.


04-14-2003 M.E. (Bunny) Eastveld    

Hi Kay Lee:
well done. Gripping poem. Great Imagery.
Bunny


04-04-2003 Janet Owenby    

Excellant work Kay lee very vivid imagery,Important message.


03-31-2003 Esther Spurrill    

Very good. I loved the imagery you used.


03-30-2003 Denny Sisson    

Kay, right on target. I gave you a ten. Good poem


03-29-2003 Adela Ruiz    

Nice poem:)


03-26-2003 Nancy Pawley    

This cuts right to the heart of the matter, Kay Lee. Fantastic job.
Nancy


03-26-2003 Debra Rose    

I love the last line: "religiouns have been created from less"


03-24-2003 Meg Horner    

it stands hard as a stone.


03-18-2003 Pepper Basham    

Wonderful, Kay Lee; very deep and dark (unfortunately with a ring of truth). Great imagery as usual.


03-18-2003 Sarah West    

i realy realy realy love this poem, its one of my favorites ^_^
Heba


03-17-2003 Lyle Berry    

A perfect characterization of what is happening over there, with all the horror and meaninglessness.

Well crafted and wonderful, Kay Lee.

Warm hugs!
Lyle


03-16-2003 Ellis Garcia    

Wow this is a real good poem... i really like it! its beautiful!


03-16-2003 Janet Owenby    

Oh wow! this is a masterpiece I mean that sincerly.So beautifully written and so true ,
the worlds pain wrapped up in lines of your poem. I love this, pure perfection. A poem that speaks truth and rips your heart strings out.
Written with class.


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