It's the Wind
by
Riley M.
(Age: 16)
copyright 03-22-2003
Age Rating: 10 to 127
Do you hear it?
It's the wind,
That hushed yet enchanting breeze,
The untouchable breath we cannot seize,
It's the wind.
Do you see it?
It's the wind,
A hueless, brisk whirl,
Like the windows of heaven unfurled,
It's the wind.
Do you feel it?
It's the wind,
Moving steadily on its path,
Withstanding everyday wrath,
It's the wind.
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05-12-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut
This sounds very breezy! It blew me away! Thanks, Anthony
07-17-2003 Anne W.
When you teach your little brother about "The Five Sences" (you know, hear, feel, smell, ect) show him this peom first, to start him off. Lol.
04-22-2003 Caitlin M.
Perfect! Especially for someone my age.
04-13-2003 Regina S.
what a prettiful poem! xept the 1st line make u wanna close your eyes and hear it but you can't cause you need to keep reading the poem (lol)! :1
03-28-2003 Nancy Pawley
What a breath of fresh air, Riley..I enjoyed the breeze of your poem.
Nancy
03-24-2003 Kay Lee Kelly
The wind to day has long fingers reaching,
leaves and birds futter in her power.
good work on the wind.
03-23-2003 Nadia Emanuel
cool! i luv the way this poem flows, wicked!
03-22-2003 Danielle Laukhart
I really liked the poem it was great.
03-22-2003 Sarah West
and im the 2nd one hehehe, Kaeli and Rily r both nice names n i like them both ^_^, keep reading my aaaaaaa stuff tehhee,
UR PNP FRIEND Heba (i always write that)
03-22-2003 Riley M.
YAY!JANET YOU ROCK!! lol, thank you sooo much!^-^ im soooo happy teehhehe
03-22-2003 Janet Owenby
Yes! It is here on front page and I get to be the first to give you a big fat ten cause little lady you deserve it.
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