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God's Canvas

by Riley Mackenzie (Age: 21)
copyright 03-27-2003


Age Rating: 10 +

The sky is God's incredible canvas
Blue, purple, pink, orange, red,
At night, stars go in clouds stead,
God's incredible canvas.

He paints with brushes of the finest quality,
Sleek strokes, tiny dabs, gentle tints, vigorous impacts,
Heavenly artwork, beauty-it never lacks
God's incredible canvas.

His painting has particles of heaven floating within,
Enormous, enlightening and elegant, it shines on,
Always changing, never gone,
God's incredible canvas


i always thought the sky looks like a painting, don't you?






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        09-04-2004     Lisa Anderson        

Wow, it is amazing. I wrote a poem JUST LIKE THIS ONE! It is in my diary. The only difference is that people were the different colors and strokes. :)

        04-23-2003     Gregory Christiano        

Nice description...a canvas of creation.

        04-13-2003     Regina S.        

yep, The sky does look like a giant painting. Great poem!! ^*^

        03-31-2003     Nancy Pawley        

Riley, I love poetry that paints pictures and seeing the sky through your eyes is beautiful indeed.
Nancy

        03-29-2003     Sarah West        

I LOVE IT RILEY, keep writing
Heba

        03-29-2003     Christopher Doss        

Indeed it does look that way. I love looking at the sky myself. It speaks to your emotions and carries you away with it at times.
Good write
Chris



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