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Eternal love
by Regina S.
copyright 04-07-2003

Age Rating: 4 to 127

A beaten soldier lies forgotten,
A tired soul after an endless quest.
In times when true love has died and rotten
A broken spirit lies down to rest.

A lonely child lies weeping on a pillow
Her salty tears would fill the ocean floor
And touch the heart of just one dying willow
To show the world what friends are really for.

Both would travel worlds of endless fire
So many battles they have yet to fight
To fulfill their only true desire:
Just to know the other is alright.

For bonds of friendship never can be broken
And when they meet true love will be awoken.

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01-09-2006 Mehrina B.

Oh wow, this was so beautiful! I don't know how you write so good! I have a long way to go until I can write as half as good as you! The rhymes were absolutely perfect and so was the spelling and grammar, and it was perfect all around! I think this is one of the most heartfelt poems I have ever and will ever read. Bravo, Regina, simply Bravo!

05-24-2005 Kristy Ahn

Bravo great work! It couldn't have done in any better way. I too had written one before and I really had a haed time. My question is how did you do it?

03-29-2004 Madeline C.

Its really touching.I like this line "And touch the heart of just one dying willow".I thouht that was a pretty image.:>

03-11-2004 Matthew Czigan

this was a good poem, but it doesn't seem to have true meaning i mean it means something but it doesn'tseem very felt,umm I think it would be easier to explain with saying that "there doesn't seem to be enough devotion" but then that only gives an idea of what I mean i guess but I hope you understand what I'm trying to say. otherwise it was a great poem.

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01-01-2004 Alixandria W.

this was great poem

12-07-2003 Jenna T.

i admire you regina...nuff said...
Jenna T.

04-26-2003 Kayde Gibbon

you have great skills of at poetry

04-26-2003 Julie Stephens

i so agree with this as my best friend is the BEST (he is male)

julie

04-22-2003 Elizabeth Velez

Very nice work!

04-20-2003 Veronica W.

lovley

04-14-2003 Riley M.

this is awsome!!!you really got a talent for poetry ^-^

04-08-2003 Ruthanne Atkinson

Beautiful poem - nice work Regina. :)