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Sunset

by Riley Mackenzie (Age: 21)
copyright 04-09-2003


Age Rating: 4 +

The sunset takes her,
place near head of the mountain,
slowly descending.






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        05-30-2006     Jessica Peters        

This is why I like haiku's. They're short and simple, yet you can put such a picture into them and there's a message behind all of them. Great job!

        05-25-2005     Kristy Ahn        

THe poem is very nice and simple put into wonderful words. No more is needed to describe a sunset.

        01-24-2005     Katie Moss        

A perfect sunset description... ^_^

        04-21-2003     Gregory Christiano        

For me, Haiku is the most difficult of poetry to write. I admire anyone who can convey meaning and scope in such a limited and confined technique. Very nice job.

        04-19-2003     hedwig        

Good, but I decide a little more.

        04-17-2003     Barry Clopton Lanier        

GREAT HAIKU...............

        04-16-2003     Buddy Ales        

Good Job on the haiku,Riley....

        04-15-2003     Pepper Basham        

Lovely, Riley.

        04-15-2003     Janet Owenby        

E$xcellant Riley



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