Home of: Prose, Poetry & Contests Prose-n-Poetry

Prose-n-Poetry.com

 Email Us [e-mail]
Enter our Poetry Contest and Win a Cash Prize !
Tell your friends! We Pay You to Comment!
Welcome !

Please Sign In
MemberID
password
Save Cookie?  
Get lost password

Join Us

Points Reference

NEW! PnP Contests
Member Contests
Contest Winners

Sailor Moon Home
Games

Members
Moonatics
Gold Writers
Silver Writers
Free Members

Galleries
Sailor Moon

Music
Sailor Moon
Christmas
Read !
Poetry
Stories
Books
Columns
Recipes
MoonNotes
Write !
Poetry
Stories
Books
Recipes
MoonNotes
Workshops
Poetry Workshop
Stories Workshop
Books Workshop
Reference
Poetry Help
Stories Help
F.A.Q

Programs
Sailor Moon Episodes
Banners
Resources

On Line
Robert Betts
Frank Fields
Richard Reed Jr
Nancy Wilson
4 Writers

0 Free Members

4 Members
31 Guests

He's Singing Our Song
by Mary -BrytEyz- Ball (Age: 38)
copyright 08-05-2001


Age Rating: 1 to 127

 
I miss you tonight
And it all feels wrong
It's just not right
He's singing our song

With every word he sings
My nerves are revolting
I think of the things
That life is witholding

It's just not right
Listening to him sing
I close my eyes to sight
tuning out everything

Until I see you again
I'll stay in a dreamy haze
Dreaming of my friend
Singing me "Amazed"


Spell Check Rhymer Poetry Analyst


Help Us Stop Plagiarism - Nearly all works at PnP are original. However a few people choose to plagiarize. To check, choose a phrase from the work, then either drag and drop to the search box or copy and paste. click on search and works at Google will be shown which match. Just to be sure, please do this before you recommend or rate the work highly...
Google
If you think this work is plagiarized please


Select a Random Work
from Poetry

Comments on this Article/Poem:
Click on the commenter's name to see their Author's Page

05-28-2007 Leigh G.    

Hmm, there are really a lot of couples that have "songs". I liked your flow and choice of words in this poem, even though it was on the short side. Although, in the end I did get the feeling this was written from experience, but there wasn't really an impact. It was more of sad resigning to the present situation, but I like that.

Hmm, I have no idea what error you speak of in comments, for since you fixed it I didn't find any more myself. :) Authors that fix your errors instead of snapping at you saying they thought it was perfect and didn't want to fix a simple mispelling...what a nice change. Good work, keep writing!


Leigh of the Commenting Community
06-19-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

Its not just songs, I have found smells do the same thing. Cornbread takes me back to the kitchen at the farm where my Grandmother cooked dinner. Life was good then and her cooking was the best! Thanks, Anthony
04-01-2001 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

Thank you Beverley! I fixed my typo. I'd blame it on not being able to access my hotmail spellchecker... but it's my fault and my fault alone.

To all, thanks for reading... and nothing quite plays the heart strings better than a song, eh? *smile*




04-01-2001 Beverley McInnis    

Songs do bring back memories and create feelings deep inside - as you illustrate well in this emotional poem. Question though....the word sining, is that the correct spelling?




04-01-2001 Sharon B.    

Oh Mary,
I feel this poem so deeply. It really speaks to my heart. Been there, done that...Some songs really do play you for real! Thanks for sharing that.



Visitor Reads: 825
Total Reads: 1007
Comments: 5

Author's Page

Email the Author

Add a Comment




Favorite of:


Send Page to a Friend
Points Reference Privacy
PnP Terms of Service Contact Us
  SEO Software

Visitors
View Stats