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Only Falling
by Carmen C.
copyright 05-12-2003


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 

I am only falling,
Falling through space and time,
I am only bearing,
Bearing the time.

I am only falling,
Bearing the time,
Time has ceased to go on,
Memories,
I am only falling and as I fall I remember you and how kind,
How kind you were to me.

I am only falling,
Only bearing and remembering,
I am falling,
And yet I feel so happy,
I am only falling,
Falling through time, space, and memories.

I will miss you,
My heart breaks,
My head aches,
I can prosper.

Even as I fall I prosper.
Because even as I fall I can love you.
After all,
You loved me.
So as I fall I will be kind to you,
After all I am only falling,
Only falling as humanity passes away,
But then again what is humanity?



*This is dedicated to my best friend Tara Donohoe, who lost something and prospered, even as she was falling.*


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11-09-2005 Lyra M.    

That's so pretty....Good work...
02-04-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

This is very much worth reading. Thanks for the thought, Anthony
05-19-2003 Liz Cozens    

Love the poem, particularly the repetition, in my opinion it makes the poem stronger in its telling, personally i would have carried on the repetition throughout the start of all the verses. Hope to read more of your work. L
05-13-2003 Ruthanne Atkinson    

Hi Carmen,

Good poem, I like it a lot but it does get repetitive (unless that's the type of poem it's supposed to be). I love the message though, and can't wait to see some more of your poems!
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