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I'm Sorry
by Eric Carrillo (Age: 28)
copyright 08-06-2001


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
"I'm sorry, will you please forgive me?"
Perhaps, I've heard that plead time and time again.
A second chance? Such a hard thing to grant, and yet so painful not to.
It's a thorn, a dagger, a flaming sword, that burns deep within my bosom!
"I'm sorry, will you please forgive me?"
Oh such pain, such anguish, such misery, do I dare forgive you?
A second chance is worth so much, and yet it hurts so much not to.
A second chance, I dare not give!
It's a cliff I dare not dive off!
It's an unfamiliar lake, which depths I know not.
I'd gladly grant such priceless privilege with the knowledge that the path with you will not grow dim with sorrow once more...


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10-05-2002 Suzanne Gillette    

Eric,
I think forgiveness has to start within. I agree with Billy, Forgiveness not granted is the worst punishment... especially if you cannot forgive yourself. Great write!
10-19-2001 Eric Carrillo    

Hi evry one, and thanks for stopping by. I really appreciate your comments.
04-01-2001 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

It's scary to say the least, like diving into unknown waters like you said. But like Robert said... IF given and forsaken a second time... NEVER again! I think that's when they started calling me a fool. *grin*

*sigh*... but on the other hand... Jesus said seventy times seven times... (NOTE: NOT In the case of abuse however. Jesus also said to cherish and respect life!)

*side thought*... It must be nice to be perfect. :)




04-01-2001 Lyle Berry    

Very well written, almost classical in structure. Great theme too!




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