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Kill Yourself Discreetly
by Mary -BrytEyz- Ball (Age: 38)
copyright 08-08-2001


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
In Response To Lyle Berry's "The Craven"...

Let your words be your knife
For they cut just as neatly
Let your words be your knife
Though they can't cut completely
Take it out on paper
By saying words so sweetly
Take it out on paper
And kill yourself discreetly
Bury troubles in rhyme
Then seal them in concretely
Bury troubles in rhyme
until it's full repletely
To resurrect yourself
conduct yourself elitely
To resurrect yourself
Just write your story meekly




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05-28-2007 Leigh G.    

Oy, not exactly what I was expecting! This work rather jumps out at me, because I can really see where this comes in. When people dwell on something too long, it rips apart the human mind. I like to write poems to get my frustrations out, and it usually keeps the out and away. But, I can also see for people that write about and don't get it out of their heads, how it there is even a way to speed the decay of one's mind in a way I didn't previously give much thought. *nods approvingly* Great flow, rhythm, and structure too! Great work!


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09-14-2005 Debra Rose    

Oooh....wow. Talk about harsh. I have to go and read what inspired this! A mix between insipid, burning, rage and passion seems to drive this, and I have fallen in love!

Ah, Mary...your work always makes me happy! lol
09-14-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

I wonder what Lyle thought? Its funny how some never say what they think. You can' shut me up! OK, I will now! Anthony
03-07-2005 Sammy A.    

The title scared me!! I thought you actuaally ment kill yourself! But this is a good way to do so :)
01-23-2005 David Pekrul    

Writing poetry is good therapy.
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